Go Back   Dallas Cowboys Forum - CowboysZone.com > Main Forums > Off-topic Zone

Cowboys Chat: 0 user(s) online


Home  |  Fan Zone  |  News Zone  |  Draft Zone  |  Off-topic Zone  |  Forum Rules  |  Chat  |  ** Change Graphics **

Reply
 
Display Modes Thread Tools
Old 01-09-2013   #1
Romo 2 Austin
Draft
 
Romo 2 Austin's Avatar
Years Donated
2010, 2011, 2012
 
Joined:
Oct 2009
Location:
New York
Posts:
10,888
Default A huge favor - Grammar check for college essay.

I have completed my college essay for transferring. It is 500 words and I would be greatly appreciative if any of you can take a look at it and check it for any grammatical mistakes. Please send me a PM if you can do this! I will return the favor anyway I can.
Romo 2 Austin is offline   Reply With Quote

Old 01-09-2013   #2
Sam I Am
Unfriendly and Aloof!
 
Sam I Am's Avatar
 
Joined:
May 2006
Location:
Betelgeuse
Posts:
30,975
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Romo 2 Austin View Post
I have completed my college essay for transferring. It is 500 words and I would be greatly appreciative if any of you can take a look at it and check it for any grammatical mistakes. Please send me a PM if you can do this! I will return the favor anyway I can.
www.grammarly.com
Formerly the notorious nyc!

I've got more red flags than Soviet Russia!

There is a good chance that you don't like me, but there is a better chance that I don't care.

If I'm not insulting you, I'm probably not aware that you exist.



Jerry Jones in the draft room is suicide on the football field. The line of scrimmage is EVERYTHING. Something Jerry doesn't understand.
Sam I Am is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #3
Romo 2 Austin
Draft
 
Romo 2 Austin's Avatar
Years Donated
2010, 2011, 2012
 
Joined:
Oct 2009
Location:
New York
Posts:
10,888
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Sam I Am View Post
Seems great but don't really have $29.99 :/
Romo 2 Austin is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #4
a_minimalist
Senior Member
 
a_minimalist's Avatar
 
Joined:
Mar 2012
Location:
Earth
Posts:
4,531
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Sam I Am View Post
He's alive!!
a_minimalist is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #5
Meat-O-Rama
Vegetarians are so stupid.
 
Meat-O-Rama's Avatar
Years Donated
2004, 2007, 2011
 
Joined:
Apr 2004
Location:
Manhattan Beach,
Posts:
2,155
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Romo 2 Austin View Post
I have completed my college essay for transferring. It is 500 words and I would be greatly appreciative if any of you can take a look at it and check it for any grammatical mistakes. Please send me a PM if you can do this! I will return the favor anyway I can.
PM me, I'll be glad to help.
“…people’s need to be right is stronger than their ability to be objective.”
N. Crawford, The American Psychological Association
Meat-O-Rama is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #6
zrinkill
Diamond surrounded by trash
 
zrinkill's Avatar
Years Donated
2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013
 
Joined:
Apr 2005
Posts:
32,047
Default

You misspelled number one receiver.

It starts with a D and ends with a Z.
victory is ours
zrinkill is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #7
Risen Star
Senior Member
 
Risen Star's Avatar
 
Joined:
Jan 2006
Posts:
14,779
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by zrinkill View Post
You misspelled number one receiver.

It starts with a D and ends with a Z.

-


We'll settle this with a good dust up.
Risen Star is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #8
Romo 2 Austin
Draft
 
Romo 2 Austin's Avatar
Years Donated
2010, 2011, 2012
 
Joined:
Oct 2009
Location:
New York
Posts:
10,888
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Meat-O-Rama View Post
PM me, I'll be glad to help.
Thank you! Sent you a PM.
Romo 2 Austin is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #9
JoeyBoy718
Senior Member
 
Joined:
Oct 2011
Posts:
885
Default

If you need an extra set of eyes PM me. I'm a linguist and I was editor of an undergraduate scholarly journal while in college.
JoeyBoy718 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #10
Phoenix
Senior Member
 
Phoenix's Avatar
Years Donated
2011, 2012
 
Joined:
Aug 2008
Location:
Arlington, VA
Posts:
3,765
Default

Volunteer Yoda, also he could do.
The liver is EVIL! It must be PUNISHED!
Phoenix is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #11
pupulehaole
Senior Member
 
pupulehaole's Avatar
 
Joined:
Mar 2009
Posts:
1,153
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by zrinkill View Post
You misspelled number one receiver.

It starts with a D and ends with a Z.
Roflllllll this made my day.
“When you surround an army, leave an outlet free. Do not press a desperate foe too hard.”
-Sun Tzu
pupulehaole is online now   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #12
Hostile
Right Kind of Guy
Years Donated
2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012
 
Joined:
Apr 2004
Posts:
117,253
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Romo 2 Austin View Post
I have completed my college essay for transferring. It is 500 words and I would be greatly appreciative if any of you can take a look at it and check it for any grammatical mistakes. Please send me a PM if you can do this! I will return the favor anyway I can.
I was an English Major. If no one else helps you I will.
Hostile is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #13
Sarge
94
 
Sarge's Avatar
Years Donated
2004, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013
 
Joined:
Apr 2004
Location:
Utica, N.Y.
Posts:
18,656
Nick Eatman

Quote:
Originally Posted by zrinkill View Post
You misspelled number one receiver.

It starts with a D and ends with a Z.

There is no formula for success except an unconditional acceptance of life and what it brings.
Sarge is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #14
ajk23az
Through Pain Comes Clarity
 
ajk23az's Avatar
Years Donated
2009, 2010, 2011, 2012
 
Joined:
Apr 2004
Location:
Tempe, AZ
Posts:
7,573
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Sam I Am View Post
+1. This place is pretty sweet. I believe they have like a 3 week trial or something that I used for a few essays. It caught quite a few punctuation errors of mine.
ajk23az is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-09-2013   #15
StanleySpadowski
Senior Member
 
StanleySpadowski's Avatar
 
Joined:
Apr 2004
Posts:
4,812
Default

I hate what the internet has done to academic pursuits.

Call me old fashioned, but perhaps a college essay should be completed in its entirety by the student, punctuation and all. This isn't a shot as the OP because he's almost forced to get help as everyone else is.

I've seen students buy their class rank online for the most part and it infuriates me.
StanleySpadowski is offline   Reply With Quote

Reply


Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 04:32 AM.


Powered by vBulletin®
Copyright ©2000 - 2013, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
© 2004-2012 CowboysZone.com