The Lost Art of Sports Journalism

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I will never understand some people.

I assume you would get into journalism because you love to write. So then why become a hack instead of a writer? A hack is literally someone who writes low quality pieces that are rushed to print. (Incidentally, and I don't mean this to be flippant, but that is why Ed Werder isn't a hack. He is a talking face, not a writer. What he delivers to us is spoken versions of what hacks do give us.)

Why put effort into learning a discipline and then abandon it? Today, the sports journalists want sound bites and angles. Anything that will cause a buzz, because a buzz means traffic. Good or bad traffic sells.

Here's a simple comparison. How much attention did Tony Romo's story about changing a tire for an old couple after the Cleveland game last year get in comparison to Cabo? They are still talking about Cabo. Media even asked Minnesota if any of their guys went to Cabo. Why? Because they had a bye and were playing us. That passes for research now. Sad.

I think part of it is that people no longer love to read. They just want an information spew and it doesn't matter what the quality is. They will fill in their own thoughts later and cognitive thought or research on the part of the writer is a waste of time. More the pity.

I have to come to this second conclusion because I often see someone write a well thought out post using good details and almost immediately I see this response.

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"Too long, didn't read."

It's the fate of a generation scared to learn anything for fear it might actually inspire them to learn more.

A while back I posted a thread about Blackie Sherrod. Blackie had style and it drew you in. I want to re-introduce one of the quotes I posted by him.

"In a perfect world, a fair world, Bob Hayes should be forced to carry a small calf on his shoulders when he runs the dashes...Mark Spitz should swim with a sea anchor...Ella Fitzgerald should sing every note with a mouth full of Tootsie Rolls."

Even if you don't know who Ella Fitzgerald is you have probably tried to talk coherently while eating a Tootsie Roll. If not, you haven't lived. But maybe just maybe a few people who read that the first time wondered why he would say that about Ella Fitzgerald and listen to the lady sing.

That is the power of writing. Even sports journalism has that power. Let me show you what I mean. The link below is an article written by William Nack. Warning, it is extremely long. It is so long it took me four posts to get it all in there at the time. It is worth your time to read though.

Nack Article

If you didn't bother to read the article you don't need to read any further. You prove the point. If you did read it I have one question to ask. Do you suddenly feel a kinship to a horse you may have never even seen run?

Isn't that amazing? That is the power of writing. I am sure that the DFW media members at one time or another were inspired by great writing and I am also just as sure that as they learned their craft they were good at it.

What changed?

We did.

That's right. It is us as fans that have changed the destiny of sports journalism. We want our information and we want it right now. Careful, thoughtful research be damned. We want instant stories. Actually to hell with stories, we want instant sound bites. From there we simply provide our own commentary and supply the story.

You're probably asking, "what the hell sent Hos off on this rant?" I read an article today by one of our esteemed media and it just grated on me. The article took no effort to write. No different than a typical over reaction mixed with shtick.

One of the foremost ideas of this "article" was the concept of when you fire a Coach. The theory was the Super Bowl coaches keep their jobs, as do the Coaches who get their teams to the Championship games, although these coaches jobs were "probably" safe. Every other coach should be wary of the door on their way out.

Do you get the gist being presented there? At minimum 28 teams per year would change Head Coaches. That was the brilliant idea of how to make things better because the writer did not like the idea of continuity. That idea doesn't make me want to listen to Ella Fitzgerald or try and talk while eating a Tootsie Roll. The only thing it accomplishes is to make me shake my head at how far sports journalism has fallen.

The sad thing is, this "article" began as advice offered to Jerry Jones. As if the writer knows something Jerry should know. I can be critical of Jerry Jones, but thank God he isn't that freaking stupid. Not even Dan Snyder is that damned dumb. Do you get the depths of stupidity that this "article" has sunk to?

So what is the reason for it to be written at all? Simple. Wade Phillips is a polarizing figure and he is being given an extension. This will create a buzz. Those who don't like that he is coming back will read this and think "damn right." They don't stop and think about the lack of thought. All they want is validation for their own thoughts and the spew provides it. They love the buzz.

A couple of days ago I shared a laugh with dcfanatic over an article that was negative about bringing Wade back. There was nothing inherently wrong with the article. What struck me as funny was who authored it. A man who just a few months ago announced his retirement and paid homage to Blackie Sherrod as he compared himself in riding off into the sunset.

First of all, he couldn't carry Blackie Sherrod's notebook. Him alluding to Blackie and then surfacing to write for ESPN Dallas is a sad insight into how important these writers think they are. Hey, his article created a buzz. Mission accomplished.

Louis Nizer was a famous barrister in New York City. He wrote the Foreward of the Warren Commission report on the assassination of John F. Kennedy. He was a brilliant man. He once said this.

"A man who works with his hands is a laborer. A man who works with his hands and his head is an artisan. A man who works with his hands, his head, and his heart is an artist."

We have laborers feeding us information on our favorite team. We are missing out on the artists.
 

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Hostile;3249054 said:
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"A man who works with his hands is a laborer. A man who works with his hands and his head is an artisan. A man who works with his hands, his head, and his heart is an artist."

We have laborers feeding us information on our favorite team. We are missing out on the artists.

i like the first quote, i sadly agree with the second one (yours).
i have almost stopped reading most of the sportswriters, i just read enough
to see if it has any info or is just an opinion.

little ball of nothing would be a more appropriate name for your unnamed
writer.
 
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Nice read hos, Ive been saying this. no Flaming this on cbz for several years . It " with "it " being what is supposed to be journalism has become sensationalism in sports writing. Very rarely you do get actual analysis or a quality interview. Just some guy who has to get a paper in by 4 so print can start . Or some chick who needs to calm down and find another job.

I minored in journalism in college and found it to be really annoying that these people actually call them selfs journalist. If you were really a journalist you wouldn't be writing crap about sports. Nothing against that just i feel there are very few Actual sports journalist . None in this town. Id much rather come here or read blogging the boys anyday. And no one's getting paid here or on btb.
 

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I understand that youre saying about professional pride but whats happened is pretty obvious.

Youre original assumption is wrong. People don't get into sports journalism because they love to write. They do it because they love sports. Pretty much every guy in this place would jusp at the oppurtunity to write for the DMN.

Combine that with the progression of cable TV and the subsequent diminishing of the newspaper and you get what weve gotten.

And sorry Hos but while Secratariat's eulogy is well written I just don't see how that shows that no one writes well now. I could buy it if it was written before the Belmont in 1973. Its a piece written after the death of an American sporting icon.

I'm pretty sure that Michael Jordan will have some well written verbage about him after he croaks.

PS I forgot about that Jets fan masquerading as a Cowboys fan for those years.
 

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tl/dr :laugh2: ;)

I suppose this is one of those rare cases where I'm forced to agree with you Hos. :D The DFW media particulalry is just terrible overall. Outside of few writers here and there (archer, Spags, and even Terrence Hill more of the time), it's largely tabloid journalism at its finest and nothing more.
 

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What a great read, but I'm drunk, tired, and too lazy to type a thoughtful response. I'll save that for my sober mind.
 

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That article was great Hos. I'm a big fan of Mitch Albom of the Detroit Free Press. He just has gifts and nurtures them in his writing.

Like everything else in life, there's the Hall of Fame and there's Class A in the NY Penn League.
 

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poor journalism standards in the gutter press are one of my biggest irritations. at the risk of incurring your wrath for posting a soccer story hos heres an example of just how poor sports journalism is on this side of the pond.

wednesdays daily record ran this story:

Exclusive: Scott Brown set for shock Celtic exit after being told he has no future at club
Jan 20 2010 Keith Jackson

Tony Mowbray has stunned star man Scott Brown by telling him he has no future at Celtic.

Record Sport understands the Scotland midfielder was given the bombshell news during a showdown meeting with Mowbray before Christmas - and that the manager made it clear he hoped to sell him during the January transfer window.

Brown is believed to be devastated by Mowbray's decision to ditch him - and by the fact his one-time mentor at Hibs, a man he had huge respect for, chose to jettison him during his long slog back to fitness after botched ankle surgery last summer.

Brown, signed from Easter Road by previous Celtic boss Gordon Strachan for £4.5million, had been a key player fo rMowbray in the manager's first few months even though he was playing in serious discomfort.

He eventually broke down in October and was flown to Amsterdam to go under the knife a second time in a desperate bid to beat the injury and help his boss secure the SPL title during his first season in charge.

He is now back at the club's Lennoxtown HQ working his way towards full fitness but heartbroken Brown, who is just days away from rejoining full training, knows Mowbray would rather sell him immediately than play him when he is ready to return to action.

Brown has been a long-term signing target for Spurs manager Harry Redknapp and was also attracting serious interest from Birmingham gaffer Alex McLeish before his most recent op.

But although he could land a bumper wage deal in the Premiership, Brown has said consistently he is content at Celtic and has no desire to leave Glasgow's East End.

Last night, when contacted by Record Sport, the player said: "Yes, there was a conversation between myself and the manager but I am not prepared to go into details.

"I believe these things should remain private. Maybe you should ask him what was said. I have nothing more to add."

But privately Brown has been rocked by his manager's stance and his team-mates are also understood to have been appalled by the manner in which Mowbray has treated one of the most popular and highly-rated players at the Parkhead club.

And this shock move has triggered a chain of events that has led to further serious unrest among Mowbray's first-team squad.

Agroup of senior players spoke up against the manager earlier in the season after he repeatedly attacked them in public following a string of poor results and admitted he would like to bring in as many as 10 new players in the transfer window.

Mowbray agreed to curb his criticism of his team but has shown a ruthless streak by selling four players - Gary Caldwell, Barry Robson, Willo Flood and Chris Killen - in the first two weeks of the January sales.

Without them Mowbray's team stumbled to a 1-1 draw at home to bottom club Falkirk on Saturday, a result that leaves Celtic trailing SPL leaders Rangers by nine points.

Now Brown fears he could be the next one out, against his will.

And top scorer Scott McDonald is another key man fretting on his immediate future after apparently failing to impress Mowbray enough to nail down a place in the manager's shot-shy attack.

celtic responded by releasing the following statement on wednesday afternoon

club statement on scott brown story
Newsroom Staff
CELTIC Football club have today rejected an erroneous newspaper story regarding Scott Brown, which claimed manager Tony Mowbray informed the midfielder that he had no future at the club.

The story, which appeared on Wednesday morning, has been dismissed by both Tony Mowbray and Scott Brown as being totally without foundation.

The club is currently taking legal advice over the issue.


Scott remains a central figure in the manager's long-term plans for Celtic and Tony can categorically state that he has never told the player that he wants him to leave the club.


The Celtic manager said: "The story is absolute nonsense. I never told Scott Brown that I want him to leave the club. Scott is a huge player for Celtic and absolutely part of the future plans of this club.


“I have worked with Scott for a number of years and have a great relationship with him. It’s disappointing that people are able to write things which are so inaccurate.


“But I know our supporters will understand that unfortunately this is one of the things we need to deal with. I am sure they will also know that we are all working together at Celtic to do all we can to achieve success for the club,”


Scott Brown said: "Obviously I am very disappointed with this article as there is no foundation to it. I have worked with the manager for some time and have a very good relationship with him.


“It’s disappointing to have been out for so long with an injury but I’m looking forward to getting back to full fitness as soon as possible and getting back in to the team for the second half of the season.”


As a club, we can only speculate about the motivation of such an erroneous article but we can assure the Celtic supporters that we will not allow this type of reporting to unsettle the club or the player.


At this stage of the season, it’s more important than ever that everyone at Celtic Football Club and the supporters pull together. We will not let this be disrupted by any outside interference.

yesterdays record stood by their story

Celtic star Scott Brown still believes he's set for exit despite Celtic denial
Jan 21 2010

SCOTT Brown continued to insist yesterday that he was told he can leave Celtic.

The SPL club went public to deny Record Sport's story that revealed Tony Mowbray informed the midfield player he could be sold during the January transfer window.

But information given to us made it clear Brown believes his days at Celtic Park are numbered.

We stand by that information and our source, who is well known to Celtic.

Yet, on the Parkhead club's official website yesterday they branded our story as "erroneous and without foundation."

The truth is that before printing the story it was read out to Brown.

And there is no question, no doubt at all, Record Sport's piece was endorsed by him and his reaction included.

He knows we reported accurately a story which has been the talk of his Celtic team-mates at their Lennoxtown base.

In fact, even yesterday afternoon Brown was still adamant he'd been told he could leave.

Someone has been economical with the truth, but Record Sport's conscience is clear. It's now a matter for Brown and Celtic.




i'm sure you'll notice which side of the story has quotes from the people involved and talk of legal action and which side has sensationalist headlines and no substance to the story. also bear in mind that this "newspaper" have been succesfully sued in the past by the club for slander after they sent reporters to england to follow the players on their christmas night out and invented stories of the players running riot under the headline "thugs and thieves"
 

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I remember a few years ago someone wrote to one of the local media asking them why they did not do some play by play or give more detailed reports during training camp. The response from the media member was along the lines of ...the average fan does not want that much detail.

Maybe that reporter was right, but at the same time I noticed many of the fans that went to training camp started making posts and giving us the details we zoners wanted...aka more details and play by play action. Now you will notice that a few of the media members will sometimes do play by play and more detailed information but even then they do it on their blogs instead of through articles.

So sometimes it is the journalists that are just lazy, sometimes it is the people they work for that don't want these detailed reports and if the journalists want to do them they have to do them on their blogs where they can say what they want without deadlines or instructions from their employer.

At the end of the day, for the most part, the media industry (and not just the dallas media) has become a industry that is not always interested in making sound articles, reporting, investigation and responsible articles. They are more interested in getting ratings, click throughs, to be be the first to get a story out even if the details are sketchy at best.

Responsibility of the truth and facts are no longer the most important detail although you will notice the number of times some media members are called out for their antics they will fall back on the line of it is their responsibility to write or tell the truth, when in most cases their truth is really just their opinions.

Along with all of that they have forgotten that the important thing is to report the story and truth and instead they have morphed into something where they think they are the most important part and not the story, that their opinions are the truth.

It is a sad state but that is what it has become these days.
 

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BrAinPaiNt;3249171 said:
I remember a few years ago someone wrote to one of the local media asking them why they did not do some play by play or give more detailed reports during training camp. The response from the media member was along the lines of ...the average fan does not want that much detail.

What the mediot REALLY meant was that their primary target demographic, 13-25 years old is not interested in too much detail. Those are the most likely to enjoy quick, meaningless sound-bites and tabloid crap. Those are the ones targeted by shoe companies, clothing manufacturers, music videos, reality TV shows, etc.

That age group is all about texting and chatrooms, Facebook and *******, they don't have the attention span to read through a whole story about a game or a practice session, just give them the dirt and a few highlights and let them move on to the next clip.

That's is really what has changed journalism in general and sports journalism in particular. ESPN and SportsCenter have in large part destroyed the art of writing about sports.
 

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the truth of it all;3249106 said:
Nice read hos, Ive been saying this. no Flaming this on cbz for several years . It " with "it " being what is supposed to be journalism has become sensationalism in sports writing. Very rarely you do get actual analysis or a quality interview. Just some guy who has to get a paper in by 4 so print can start . Or some chick who needs to calm down and find another job.

I minored in journalism in college and found it to be really annoying that these people actually call them selfs journalist. If you were really a journalist you wouldn't be writing crap about sports. Nothing against that just i feel there are very few Actual sports journalist . None in this town. Id much rather come here or read blogging the boys anyday. And no one's getting paid here or on btb.

Again, I like giving info that I hear to the zoners and other places that I post time to time. For whatever reason, when I start typing, my thoughts race, going from one subject to another. Very hard for me to put correct sentences together, so in a way, you get used to the way your typing or writing.

Just like most of you come back with some witty sayings to someone posting, like several did yesterday on Hostile saying he doesnt like kickers. Very seldom I come up with those witty remarks, wished I could though. Not making an excuse for myself, because when I really think about it, its not so much I am tight or stuck in some mudhole, but my brain wont let me for whatever reason come up with those witty saying and unwind.

Like the person said something ok Hos, fes up, how many kickers did your former girlfriend sleep with, or wasnt that his girlfriend slept with kickers because Hos was the kicker.
I would have never thought of that in a million years. Guess just not in me to poke fun at someone or call them names etc. Maybe thats part of it.


But I do try to be formulative and give you zoners recaps, info when I find it on the Cowboys, thats what brings me joy, to share that with you, whether its good or bad writing. I will let you decide.
thats what i have to say on the writing part in a nutshell.
 

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Om;3249284 said:
Author! Author!

Hos, hope you don't mind that I took the liberty.

Hos is pretty easy, you can just PM him and flirt, you don't have to go so far as to flatter him on another board.:p: ;)

On a serious note...good to see you are doing well. :)
 

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cowboyjoe;3249291 said:
Again, I like giving info that I hear to the zoners and other places that I post time to time. For whatever reason, when I start typing, my thoughts race, going from one subject to another. Very hard for me to put correct sentences together, so in a way, you get used to the way your typing or writing.



Just like most of you come back with some witty sayings to someone posting, like several did yesterday on Hostile saying he doesnt like kickers. Very seldom I come up with those witty remarks, wished I could though. Not making an excuse for myself, because when I really think about it, its not so much I am tight or stuck in some mudhole, but my brain wont let me for whatever reason come up with those witty saying and unwind.



Like the person said something ok Hos, fes up, how many kickers did your former girlfriend sleep with, or wasnt that his girlfriend slept with kickers because Hos was the kicker.

I would have never thought of that in a million years. Guess just not in me to poke fun at someone or call them names etc. Maybe thats part of it.





But I do try to be formulative and give you zoners recaps, info when I find it on the Cowboys, thats what brings me joy, to share that with you, whether its good or bad writing. I will let you decide.

thats what i have to say on the writing part in a nutshell.



don't think anyones having a go at what is posted on here, certainly i appreciate that you post up all sorts of random stuff. often i pick up stuff that i wouldn't otherwise have spotted as i'm in scotland so don't get to see what the local media is saying.
what passes for journalism in the gutter press though is a joke
 

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Bravo Hos but alas it will fall on deaf ears.

I do slightly disagree with your premise but it is more of the chicken or egg theory.

I think people have been inundated with a steady diet of poor journalism, which resulted in a legion of the aforementioned fans you talked about in your original post.

Now it is one cycle of stupidity. Hack writes stupid unprofessional article, reader reads it, then he or she brings it to their favorite forum, water cooler, blog or mail bag, writer sees the interest, and then rinse and iterate.

What we have here is a symbiotic relationship between hacks and their at large audience that consumes the crap that the hacks produce. Garbage in = garbage out.
 

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Hostile;3249305 said:
Damn, I am honored you'd do that. Thanks, and yes, I definitely consider you a friend.
Glad to do it, hermano. Not that many of us etymologasauri left roaming the web. No way we go silent into the good night.

Oh and btw ... your team still sucks, my friend.

BrAinPaiNt;3249319 said:
Hos is pretty easy, you can just PM him and flirt, you don't have to go so far as to flatter him on another board.:p: ;)

On a serious note...good to see you are doing well. :)
Good to see you too, BP. Glad to see some things never change. ;)
 

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Fuzzy, read the book WIlliam Nack wrote in 1974 about Secretariat. Its called Big Red of Meadow Stable. You will see that his writing has not changed in all these years. He is a fine writer and journalist.

Hoss that was a great article- I hope you have the book which that article is now part of. Secretariat was an incredible horse- the absolute best racehorse that ever lived.

Actually Risen Star, a son of Secretariat, came close to the triple crown. He was not fully there at the Derby, but easily won the 86 Preakness and at the Belmont Stakes the announcer said after he blew away the field "He looks like his daddy!"
 
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