CliffnMesquite;4426405 said:
Visited a local restaurant Monday. The food is great...
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Ordering a flash, soft box defuser and some batteries...
Okay, see how the left side of her face is so brightly lit? To the point where her cheek is almost as white, or whiter, than her teeth? That's called blowing it out or "blown out". You've overexposed the photo to the point that all color is lost and it's only white. If you go to the histograms on Photoshop, or while still in camera, you'll see the the Master is probably got blinking highlights on it showing where the image is overexposed.
I know this was a quick posed shot, but the lighting could have been spot on for a great portrait if you under exposed it a bit. There are great shadows on her the right side of her face that could've been highlighted with less exposure.
Another thing to keep an eye on, pardon the pun, is her eyes. Pose her where there's a bit more white showing between her iris and the corner of her eyelids. It helps accentuate the color of the eye if it's framed on either side by white.
The smile looks 90% natural, so good job there making her feel at ease while you popped the photo. You'll see quickly when someone isn't as comfortable in front of the camera when they have "dead eyes". They're smiling, but if you block out the rest of their face and look only at the eyes, they're without emotion.
This is a pretty good example of using ambient lighting. The window was your point source/light for the shot. It works just as good as any 3200W Broncolor in this case, if you play with the exposure a bit.
What kind of softbox are you ordering? One built for the flashgun itself or a different model?
Give building one of these a shot too. Cheap as heck and work EXCEPTIONAL for what you invest. I built one of these for myself, and another for a friend. Don't use Lowe's Valspar plastic paint. It stinks to high heaven. Krylon fusion for the win. I got the bowl at Lowe's. It's a big brown plastic jobber. Bigger is much better.
http://www.ishootshows.com/2010/02/09/music-photographers-diy-beauty-dish/
He has a few shots at the end that show a secondary use for a flash that you probably haven't considered, as a source to separate the subject from a dark background. B&H has a sampler pack of pre-cut filter gels you can stick on the flash that then give you a colored flash. ******* Amber is the go to for warm portraits. When you shoot gels, make sure you have the camera's white balance set. If it's on auto, it'll try to cancel out the color of the gel you're shooting with.
However, you can use the camera's tendencies to go the opposite direction. If you shoot a very light to medium blue gel, the camera will compensate the other direction and you'll end up with an orange tint to the image which is great for giving the subject a bit more color in their face. There are white balance cards you can buy to calibrate the camera's settable options, unless you can set the Kelvin manually and have a good handle on how that works.
One more thing on the beauty dish, I built a secondary diffuser by adding a layer of translucent shower curtain. I cut out a pattern around the edge of the dish, added an inch around it, and then hotglued a piece of elastic you can get a Walmart inside of a seam made by folding over the plastic curtain edge. Only glued myself to it once or twice too.