Offseason Outlook Video - Dallas Cowboys

EmDiggy

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Dallas Cowboys Offseason Outlook Video


Good Evening CowboysZone.com and Cowboys Fans!!

I just want to start off by saying THANK YOU for allowing me to join your community and post here! Im looking forward to chatting it up with you guys all year!

We at Football Gameplan filmed Offseason Outlooks for every team.. I wanted you guys to check out the Cowboys video. If you can, please give me some feedback...both GOOD and BAD! I would like to continue to improve our videos and I need your constructive criticism! I've also posted this in other Cowboys forums, just to give you guys a heads up..

I've also included in the video a link to your forum telling viewers if they want to talk more Cowboys football...here are their fan forums! I did this in an effort to hopefully work with you guys and not to compete!

Thanks again and Enjoy!

P.S.

I know this is my first post, and I hate that I'm asking you guys for a favor right off the bat, but if I've gone about this the wrong way...then I apologize
 

Randy White

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I like the presentation. The opening theme music is catchy. The way the hosts are dressed looks very professional and the highlights are, obviously, a nice touch.

After that, it goes down hill.

If you are the either of the host, I must tell you this: you need to get better informed. ALOT better. For starters, Holland didn't play a snap all season long last year, much less started any games. The left guard ( not the right guard ) that most likely needs to be replaced in Kosier. Biggs ( Leonard Davis ) played right guard all year long and never played tackle, and the Cowboys have more than 2 important restricted free agents ( on defense ) they need to resign.

Also, you guys need to relax and let the other finish his thought. It's ok to interrupt to make an obvious correction or confirm a statement, but try to keep it to a minimum. The way to do that is to be better prepared before the show and practice as much as possible, that way you start getting used to each other and know when to step in and when not to.

Not a bad start and I'm sure it will get better as you work more at it, so don't be discouraged.


sidenote: it's " monkey off their backs ", not " monkey off their shoulders ".. ;)
 

EmDiggy

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Randy White;3288835 said:
I like the presentation. The opening theme music is catchy. The way the hosts are dressed looks very professional and the highlights are, obviously, a nice touch.

After that, it goes down hill.

If you are the either of the host, I must tell you this: you need to get better informed. ALOT better. For starters, Holland didn't play a snap all season long last year, much less started any games. The left guard ( not the right guard ) that most likely needs to be replaced in Kosier. Biggs ( Leonard Davis ) played right guard all year long and never played tackle, and the Cowboys have more than 2 important restricted free agents ( on defense ) they need to resign.

Also, you guys need to relax and let the other finish his thought. It's ok to interrupt to make an obvious correction or confirm a statement, but try to keep it to a minimum. The way to do that is to be better prepared before the show and practice as much as possible, that way you start getting used to each other and know when to step in and when not to.

Not a bad start and I'm sure it will get better as you work more at it, so don't be discouraged.


sidenote: it's " monkey off their backs ", not " monkey off their shoulders ".. ;)

Thanks Big Dog!! I appreciate the feedback! This is what I need to improve:bow:
 

rkell87

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i agree on all points with randy. relax. and make sure you have your facts straight cause after that you lose credibility
 

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