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http://www.fantasysportswarehouse.com/nfl/2015/05/25/dez-bryant-best-receiver-game/
An article I wrote on Dez, and why I think he is the best in the NFL.
I don't disagree with you on Dez. However, from a writing perspective get rid of these words "in my opinion", "I think", and the dreaded "I feel" and all variants of that. Don't put up weakness in your writing. All of those words quoted make the words YOU are typing look weak. Let's look at a bit of that article with a few changes, and compare .
There is always the question of who the best wide receiver in the league really is.
Learn to make those kind of edits your article looks like this:
There is always the question of who the best wide receiver in the league really is. There really isn’t a wide receiver in the league who can compare to Dez. At this point, the closest is Antonio Brown. Why Brown over Megatron? Injuries. Megatron’s body and style of play basically hurt him. He is literally too big, and after a while the knocks and hits taken in today’s NFL take their toll. We saw that last season. This season could be even worse for Calvin Johnson. They lost two core players on defense, and their pass rush will suffer in that regard. No defense creates a need for more offense, and that means more use of Megatron. iIt will NOT end well. I’m rambling here, back to Dez Bryant. We are talking about a man who has grown significantly since he came into the league, and we are talking about an athletic FREAK who can do it all. He is arguably the best end zone threat in the league. Going up for a jump ball against him is almost impossible to defend, and if he gets into space, you may as well pack it in because he is going to the house. He can take over games with his size and speed, just ask Philadelphia and Bradley Fletcher. He led all receivers last season with 16 touchdowns, and remember, this was in a run first offense. He also leads all receivers in touchdowns over the last five seasons with 56. Those are some incredible stats.