Bob Sacamano;1460362 said:
Bob Sacamano;1460349 said:
HA! my diction would make your bulbous head explode, it's already got too much hot air as it is, information overload is not good for you
Diction is your subject. You follow it with a dependent clause that is wrongly following a comma instead of a semi colon. That dependent clause contains the word,"it's" which means "it is." Thus...
"it is already got too much hot air as it is"
Yes, your "diction" is already impressive.[/sarcasm off]
Back to the point of it being a dependent clause. Dependant upon what? The subject, which is your "diction." So, the clause is about "hot air." What has this "hot air?" The subject, which is your "diction."
You then fail to close the clause and add an independent thought or sentence. "Information overload is not good for you."
I love irony.