What Jaylon is doing "right now" isn't nearly as important as what he's doing 2 or 3 months from now. Maybe he's sore due to the offseason layoff. Let's be concerned when the time comes to actually be concerned. "Right now" is premature. In 2 months, it won't be. What, we can't wait to criticize?!
We have actual games that we can critique. Or ignore, if you wish.
OTA's are also a time of evaluation, not just drills. So yes...criticize away! Even if one disagrees or it's unfavorable.
Wait...let's just do this instead..and save us all the bother:
"Jaylon's looks great. His hopskip he's been doing for two years? Completely gone! He is SO FLUID, more than EVER!....he'll have the best year of his career!".
There, that should do, we can move on now.